I am already hooked! And yay worldbuilding! There's nothing like a well-drawn setting to make me a happy reader. I love a 'verse that feels REAL, you know? Especially when it's invented. *g*

The idea of contemporary Chicago with vampires and brothels is srsly intriguing. Can I ask what characters you're using? If you'd rather not say, no worries. I tend not to talk about what I'm doing before it's safely on the page, so that I won't derail my own momentum.

*cheers you on*