I'm still fiddling around with the story, but it's just fiddling by now. I've had some good input from betas - \betas/!! - and done some tweaking accordingly, so now I'm at the point again where I'm purposely thinking of other things for a little while to try and refresh the brain a bit, and then I'll go back and have another look. I'm feeling pretty good about it, though. :)

Man, for a while there I thought I'd never get to this point. Oi.