I hadn't ever pictured Duck as the suicidal one...awaits continuation with interest.
Especially <3 : He had one foot up resting on one of the horizontal bars below the handrail; he was resting some of his weight on his outstretched hands. It was the kind of casually masculine pose Dan always admired and could never pull off himself. I can completely SEE that from the way you've written it.
Re: Wilby Wonderful; Dan is the one trying to save Duck; Mature; Dan/Duck
Especially <3 :
He had one foot up resting on one of the horizontal bars below the handrail; he was resting some of his weight on his outstretched hands. It was the kind of casually masculine pose Dan always admired and could never pull off himself. I can completely SEE that from the way you've written it.